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ZipIce

23 Movie Reviews

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Something in progress.

The fight scenes were a bit lacking and at times slow.

You have dramatic music but the scenes are not as dramatic as you make them out to be. Try close-ups, low and high angles, extreme contrast and the occasional one-liner.

You have done something that took quite a lot of effort and probably when you were finished you wanted to show this right away but next time, before submitting, try to go over the all the scenes and see if anything is out of place or the animation seems off.

Lesson learned

Don't leave the door unlocked. Good show, the screamed starting cracking though.

It's ok... but

There seems to be a lack of sound effects. In case point when a character is running or jumping or moving at lightning speed, they 'should' give off a unique effect. It wouldn't hurt to explore some eccentric audio, some parts of the flash it felt like I was starring at an old moving picture movie (Just animation and Music.)

Average

Animation was alright, voice acting was amateurish , and over used lines. I was almost about to hit the X but I pulled through the watch the whole thing.

Ipod joke is the best, but everything else needs work.

Hope to see more.

Nice beat.

And the hidden joke too, right click zoom in on link and barrel, realizes he does push purple down >_<

Awesome Song!

But the delivery for punch lines could use some work. Different PoV can help bring the scene to life and extra generic characters and what not.

I have to point this out.

I played the game before and I know your not a fan boy, but you should of asked someone if that was accurate with character placements. Blonde Cloud was the blue soldier, 'Original Cloud' had black hair. Actually you should just look at the walk-through or something, maybe spoilers. I think there was even 3d animated episodes of FF7 in japan too, its somewhere on youtube but even those episodes shows the original cloud + blonde cloud too.

To put it short a little more research.

bearses responds:

you retard, did you even read the part about it being a dream?

50%50

Bits and parts made me laugh, other's didn't seem to fit the mood. That #3 in the deleted scenes may of had some potential of becoming part of the skit. Heck, you should finish it and update this flash.

Awesome!

Just keep doing what you've been doing and you'll far. The same review too, first one was deleted for what ever reason.

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