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Try using tweens.

Way too short.
Try to design a menu that people are used to.
Don't name a flash my madness; MyFlip, MyAnimation, MyCharacters, MySubject, these are NOT good titles.

LeoBrekalini responds:

I'm sorry but this is my only second cartoon

This was ok.

The flow was a slow.
The file size itself was way to big for something like this, maybe convert your wav files into mp3 or use a higher compression rate.
The characters themselves might be original, but this idea has been played out before.

StomachBug responds:

Like I said it's my first animation so I haven't gotten used to everything right off the bat. I did think the file size was a bit too big but I wasn't sure until now.

Granted it might not be an original idea entirely but it's got enough content in it to be it's own thing I reckon.

I plan to make the stuff I do in the future far more snappy so don't worry about that.

I have to point this out.

I played the game before and I know your not a fan boy, but you should of asked someone if that was accurate with character placements. Blonde Cloud was the blue soldier, 'Original Cloud' had black hair. Actually you should just look at the walk-through or something, maybe spoilers. I think there was even 3d animated episodes of FF7 in japan too, its somewhere on youtube but even those episodes shows the original cloud + blonde cloud too.

To put it short a little more research.

bearses responds:

you retard, did you even read the part about it being a dream?

Good.

Nice ending. Btw if anyone actually did a background check this guy always loves his rooster jokes. It didn't come at too much of surprise but it made me chuckle.

Hulalaoo responds:

i need work more in this

Nice, but...

I think the animation is a little slow and can probably do better if it was quicker; felt like you slowed it down because it didn't meet a time frame you might of planed. Plus the music doesn't really match the mood of the scene of this quick fight and maybe have benefited if it was louder and probably something more intense.

Willpinoy responds:

Yeah, i need to work on the sound and music. The frames per second is 12, its the default for flash, it may just be lagging a little. Ill try and speed itup next time :) thanks for your input

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